Today I'll talk about "Baby hatch". That is a big problem in Japan now.
Letter One
She uses her experience that she has worked with children and their parents for a long time to make her points. By using it, she can emphasize that she understands their minds and feelings. So people can trust her and her points become persuasive.
Letter Two
She uses a piece of news that young girl and her boyfriend abandoned their child to make her points. The news is an example which describes feelings of parents who have a problem about bringing children up. It makes people sympathize them and her points become forceful.
My opinion
I don't think Baby hatch is good answer. We have to stop abandoning children before it happens. Baby hatch may save lives which might be killed. However is only saving their lives really good for them? I don't think so. Children saved by Baby hatch will be suffered from living without parents. I think it is so bad and sad not to live with parents at least during infancy. So before making Baby hatch, we have to think and carry out ideas which help the parents who are seriously suffered from bringing up their children. And also we should give them opportunity to learn and be trained for preparing to become mother or farther not only physically but mentally. I think it is good to teach youth what are parents too.
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Well.. I definately agree with you on the point that those abandoned children would get hurt mentally.
I guess all those children would be really sad about they were thrown away by their own parents.
I agree with your idea to educate young people especially teenager about the importance of parents.
However, I do not agree with you about wether baby hatch is a good or bad, I think it is not the best way to help parent and babys, but still a good way.
I also think it is really important to tell the youth what they are doing. They have to realize what parents are.
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